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Score: 94/100 (9.4 out of 10)
Framed in Love is a heartfelt, imaginative, and emotionally-resonant romantic fantasy novel by Dr. Clifton Wilcox! It’s a haunting and captivating tale of love, loss, and the power of art to preserve what life cannot. The book follows David Cross, a lonely young man who, after a life-altering lightning strike, discovers he can enter a canvas and meet Abby, a beautiful, enigmatic girl trapped inside it, setting off an unusual romance shaped by art, mystery, and heartbreak. Right off the bat, there's a magic, beauty, and whimsical nature to this whole concept. It reflects the escapism that a lot of us seek: the ability to use our creativity and imagination to escape to a different world--a more comforting world--into the loving arms of a dream girl (or dream guy). What makes that premise work is that the book does not treat the painting like a gimmick. It treats it like an emotional space. Abby is not just a pretty fantasy figure waiting on the other side of the frame, and the painted world is not just some cute magical backdrop. The novel gradually reveals that this world is fragile, fading, and deeply tied to grief, memory, and unresolved pain, which gives the romance real weight and urgency. We also appreciated that the story leans into the idea that art is not just decoration here, it is memory made visible. The hidden garden, the fading landscape, and the shifting rules of the canvas all reinforce the same core idea: beauty can preserve emotion, but it cannot completely shield us from loss. That gives the fantasy side of the novel a genuinely poignant backbone. It is not escapism for escapism’s sake. It is escapism colliding with sorrow. This is a brilliant, beautiful, and fascinating concept. However, what about the execution? Well, it's mixed, we're sorry to say (because we really wanted to like this book even more than we did). So, what's the problem? Well, this book falls into the exact same trap as the author's previous book, The Case Against Jasper: it becomes incredibly repetitive and redundant, repeating many of the same sentiments, lessons, and phrases over and over again. And, like The Case Against Jasper, much of the book reads like an epilogue in which most of the exciting, interesting, and relevant stuff already happened in the first 100 pages or so. Everything else seems drawn out and superfluous. This is exactly what happened with The Case Against Jasper: great concept, but it became like a broken record that read like an epilogue. That is really the central execution issue here. After the excellent hook and the strongest dramatic material in the first few chapters, the novel settles into a very long stretch of aftermath, reflection, healing, and emotional processing. Even the chapter structure points in that direction: after Chapter 4, we move into titles like “Echoes of the Past,” “A New Beginning,” “The Art of Letting Go,” “Finding Peace,” “The Power of Art,” and then “A Different Kind of Forever” appears both as Chapter 14 and again as the epilogue. That alone helps explain why so much of the book can feel less like rising action and more like one extended comedown. How many times can we circle back? And, like in The Case Against Jasper, almost every chapter sounds like the book is wrapping up rather than moving forward and advancing. The same phrases and general sentiments are repeated, which made the writing going from beautiful and eloquent to cloying and annoying. For example, let's just track how overused the phrase a "testament to" is in this book: From Page 21: "Her story was a lament, a bittersweet melody of longing and acceptance, a testament to the unwavering resilience, even in the face of unimaginable confinement." From Page 41: "They recited poetry they had read aloud, sometimes in hushed tones to themselves, sometimes aloud to each other, their voices echoing in the almost vacant landscape, a testament to their resilience, a celebration of their shared reality." Also From Page 41: "One day, they stumbled upon a hidden meadow, untouched by the decay that surrounded them. It was a vibrant patch of color, a testament to a time before the painting began to fade." From Page 42: "The meadow wasn't just a beautiful anomaly; it became a symbol of their love. It was a testament to their resilience, a representation of their unwavering determination to find a way out of their predicament." From Page 43: "Their love story unfolded amidst the fading colors, a testament to their enduring connection in a world defined by loss and uncertainty. " From Page 45: "The shared silence, once a testament to their deep understanding, was now filled with an unspoken anxiety, a mutual recognition of their approaching end." From Page 46: "Their shared reality was unraveling before their eyes, a testament to their precarious existence." From Page 47: They clung to each other, their bodies pressed close, finding solace in the warmth of their shared humanity, their enduring connection a testament to their resilience." From Page 48: "The painting itself, a testament to a love that transcended time and space, held the lingering essence of their shared reality, a silent echo of a love that defied the boundaries of art and life." From Page 49: "Days blurred into weeks. The neatly stacked textbooks on his desk became a chaotic pile, a testament to his neglect. Assignments remained unfinished, tests unstudied. His once-organized room became a reflection of his inner turmoil; clothes lay scattered, dishes piled in the sink, a testament to his disinterest in the mundane tasks of everyday life." From Page 53: "His neglect was a testament to the depth of his loss and the inability to reconcile with the loss of his extraordinary love. From Page 65: "They clung to each other, their love a beacon of hope in the face of despair, a testament to a connection that transcended the boundaries of time and space, a connection that would endure even after the painting faded." From Page 79: “This was no mere painting; it was a prison, a testament to the devastating power of grief and obsession.” From Page 84: “...lay unfinished on his desk, a testament to his frantic efforts...” From Page 92: “...a poignant reminder of his impossible love, a testament to a choice made out of profound love and immense sacrifice.” From Page 94: “...his love for Abby would endure, a testament to a connection that transcended the limitations of time and space...” From Page 98: “The pain that gnawed at his insides was a testament to that love...” From Page 101: “The painting stood as a testament to their impossible love...” From Page 105: “His writing became a testament to his loss...” From Page 114: “...a tribute to their love, a testament to their bond that transcended the boundaries of time and reality.” From Page 120: “It was a shared space, a testament to the extraordinary bond they’d shared...” From Page 123: “...she had created the painting in a fit of grief, a testament to a lost love.” From Page 126: “...it was a testament to the shared experience of humanity...” From Page 127, four separate times: “...a testament to the enduring power of art...” “...a testament to the resilient spirit...” “...a testament to the endurance of love and art...” “...a testament to a connection that transcended the limitations of reality...” From Page 129: “...a shrine to a memory he cherished, and a testament to a love that had transcended time and mortality.” From Page 132: “David’s journey became a testament to the transformative power of art...” From Page 138: “...a symbol of his journey, a testament to his personal growth and transformation.” From Page 139: “...a cherished memory, a testament to a love that, though impossible, had profoundly shaped his life.” From Page 142: “...not as a tragic tale of impossible love, but as a testament to the transformative power of human connection.” From Page 143: “...not as a symbol of loss, but as a testament to the impermanence of life itself, and the enduring power of love.” From Page 338: “...had become a testament to the power of art to transcend boundaries...” From Page 339, two more times: “...a testament to the enduring power of connection...” “...a testament to the restorative power of collective creativity...” “...a testament to the human spirit’s remarkable capacity for healing and renewal...” From Page 355, two more times: “His art became a testament to their unique love story...” “...a testament to the depth of his feelings...” From Page 356: “Their relationship was a testament to the boundless capacity of the human heart to love...” From Page 357, two more times: “It was a testament to the ephemeral nature of life and love...” “...a testament to the enduring power of love in its quietest, most profound forms...” From Page 410: “It was a love story unlike any other, a testament to a connection that transcended the boundaries of space and time.” From Page 411, two more times: “His story... became a testament to the transformative power of love, grief, and art.” “...a beacon of hope for others, a testament to the power of love to transcend boundaries...” From Page 412, two more times: “His art was a testament to the enduring legacy of their love...” “His life was a testament to the power of remembering, of cherishing, and of transforming grief into beauty.” This phrase is used about 190 TIMES! This book went from being so captivating and awesome to feeling like a drag because we already knew what was coming on almost every page: the author was going to say "a testament to" then list a bunch of fluffy, buzzy-worthy, profound-sounding adjectives and statements. At some point, enough is enough. A phrase like this can be powerful when used sparingly. Used this often, it starts to feel lazy, mechanically recycled, and weirdly self-congratulatory, like the book is constantly trying to summarize its own importance instead of trusting the story to do that work on its own. This is exactly what happened with The Case Against Jasper: we had to be reminded again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again that we shouldn't jump to conclusions about people before knowing the whole truth. Both of these books really didn't need to be 400 or so pages long. They could've been 30 page short-stories, and they could've been some of the best short-stories we've ever read. Instead, the author tends to give us these great concepts, then spends the majority of the book repeating information and trying to teach the reader the same lesson over and over and over again from what happened at the beginning of the book. The reader gets it already. They got it the first two-dozen times. This is so unfortunate because both books were amazing in concept and amazing when they kicked off. Then it becomes like an unending epilogue. Do you really want 3/4ths of your book to read like a needlessly-long epilogue? This book gives us David and Annie, one of the best couplings we've ever read about, a coupling that is tremendously beautiful and magical. Sadly, it just gets watered down by the redundancy and drawn out nature of this book. Anyway, we still enjoyed the concept of this book, the core characters, and the early parts of it. Check it out on Kobo!
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