Review of “Tales of Witches and Wyverns” by S. Ramsey

Score: 95/100 (9.5 out of 10)

Tales of Witches and Wyverns by S. Ramsey masterfully delivers a YA fantasy that excels at transporting readers into a rich and vibrant world filled with deep character dynamics and compelling mythology. With enchanting characters, sophisticated world-building, and a plot brimming with magic and adventure, this book has all the hallmarks of an exceptional fantasy novel.

The story introduces us to Enid, a teenager grappling with the discovery of her lineage, which ties her to both Arthurian lore and a powerful witch named Lady Sulis. Enid’s connection to Sir Cai (Sir Kay) grounds the narrative in a world familiar to lovers of Arthurian mythology, but it’s the originality in her character development that sets her apart. Enid is not an all-powerful protagonist; rather, her journey toward understanding and harnessing her magic is central to the plot. Her vulnerability, combined with her determination, makes her a relatable and engaging heroine.

At the heart of the story is the bond between Enid and her best friend, Dylan, a betrothed prince and water wyvern. The chemistry between these two characters is evident from the start. Their friendship is one of mutual trust and support, a foundation built when Dylan stood up for Enid during a childhood bullying incident. Even though Dylan is absent for much of the novel, the strength of their relationship resonates throughout, providing emotional depth and a sense of camaraderie that enriches the narrative.

Rhodri, another major character, brings a dynamic mentor-mentee relationship into the fold. Once cursed to live as a dog, Rhodri is deeply connected to Enid, having shared years with her in his animal form. Now restored to his true self, Rhodri’s arc with his sister, Ceridwin, adds layers of emotional and magical complexity to the story. Their sibling rivalry is charged with moral ambiguity, as Ceridwin’s curse and Rhodri’s response reveal themes of loyalty, sacrifice, and redemption.

The novel’s world-building is breathtaking. Ramsey’s creation of an alternate Fae/Arthurian realm is immersive, filled with mythical creatures such as wyverns, kelpies, griffins, and more. The use of Alchemy as a magic system adds a unique flavor to the familiar fantasy elements, setting this book apart from other tales in the genre. One of the most memorable creatures is the Afanc—a fearsome aquatic monster that grants wishes at a terrible price, reminiscent of mythical sirens and mermaids. Enid’s encounter with this creature adds suspense and highlights her quick thinking and cleverness.

What truly sets this novel apart is its attention to detail in character relationships and the depth of the antagonists. Malagant, the octopus-like queen of the Unseelie, stands out as a tragic villain. Her immense power comes at a significant cost to herself, creating a complexity that allows readers to empathize with her, despite her terrifying actions. Malagant’s internal struggle makes her a multi-dimensional antagonist, adding depth to the overarching conflict between the forces of light and dark.

Enid’s strength as a protagonist lies in her intelligence and cunning rather than raw magical power. Her ability to strategize, observe, and outwit her enemies creates a refreshing dynamic in a genre often dominated by brute force. Her keen awareness of her adversaries’ weaknesses, as demonstrated in her encounters with creatures like the Afanc, allows her to triumph through intellect rather than overwhelming might. This approach gives the novel a layer of sophistication that elevates the storytelling.

While Witches and Wyverns echoes certain themes from other works in the genre, such as Kelpie by Ashley Chapman and Magic, Mystery, and the Multiverse by Aurora Winter, it distinguishes itself with its vivid character dynamics and nuanced world-building. The relationships between Enid, Dylan, and Rhodri are genuine and heartfelt, offering readers a story with both emotional resonance and thrilling adventure.

The pacing of the novel is largely well-executed, though there are moments where the action slows. These lulls are balanced by rich character development and the intricacies of the magical world, keeping readers invested in the journey. The conclusion, in particular, is action-packed and emotionally satisfying, leaving readers eager for what comes next.

This book does feature improvements over the first (2022) edition, key of which is the cover. The original cover was named “Best Cover” in a previous contest. Well, this one is—shockingly—even better!

Witches and Wyverns is a brilliant example of YA fantasy done right. S. Ramsey has crafted a world that feels both expansive and intimate, populated by characters whose relationships and personal journeys are as compelling as the magical battles they face. This is a story that will resonate with readers long after they turn the final page. With its blend of magic, mythology, and heart, Witches and Wyverns is a must-read for fans of fantasy looking for something both familiar and refreshingly original.

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